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ether's breeze
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ether's breeze |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
soft embrace by ether's breeze longing's touch in calm caress soothes the soul in silent love by volumes filled through hearts at rest with quiet lack of conciousness the soul in lonely vissitude by cautions cast in future's face and simple thoughts as platitudes searching life by thoughts deemed wise of means and ways and finding there escapes and shades of dream-mists cast like shore-line waves, as wafts in air latent grows the scene so swift as time moves through the shallow glass like fleeting mem'ries yet unthought as steam-filled meadows not to last slips through fingers of the mind hand-held hopes of another kind soft embrace by ether's breeze ne'er to keep, ne'er to please |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Patiently, the heart speaks, the heart hears... lovely backdrop for the soul ... ah, but to wait for winter is to put off until spring...and then it's fishing season! This was a lovely escape. I'm keeping it to indulge again and again.  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"escapes and shades of dream-mists cast" "soft embrace by ether's breeze" Igniting the mind to reach the upper regions of space. Yes, that is what your writing often does for me. Challenging but very satisfying. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, fishing season? [smiling] thanks for choosing to look at this more than once Janette, you got it...appreciate the dead-on comments |
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