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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2008-11-01 10:30 AM



“Residual Abyss”

The emptiness consumes.
That place.
Where my love once dwelt.
Leaving behind.
Nothing but my shattered hopes.
Sinking quickly.
In to that abysmal space.
Losing myself.
As everything begins fade .
Loneliness remains.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

© Copyright 2008 Colin Heffernan - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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1 posted 2008-11-01 10:56 AM


fine write...conveys despair quite elegantly...enjoyed the quality of your eloquent craftsmanship
Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2008-11-02 03:45 PM


this aches...so hard to ignore the loneliness sometimes

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

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