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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2008-10-31 02:26 PM


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Slowly
Silently
Through still air

The yellow leaves
Come down
One
By one

And the sun’s
Light sparkles
On the ripples
Of a little stream

Should the sky
Go gray

Darkened again
By Mary Magdalene

Let the rain fall
On dead stone


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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2008-10-31 06:03 PM


that last couplet is a thinker--love the spiritual nuances of this write...how ever you may have meant them, I like the way these words spoke to me
Huan Yi
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2 posted 2008-10-31 06:20 PM


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Thanks Steve,

John

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-11-01 01:04 PM


Enjoyed the Write!


ARCTIC WIND

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