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fountain of youth II
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fountain of youth II |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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fountain of youth my watering vessel patiently lingers to christen you see my inner spirit sip my elixir restore yourself seek fresh strength from our bond for my spring is your fountain of youth Janette edited from past always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I think this one has more levels than I will ever be able to see, but I do know that I like where this one takes me...gonna go back and read it several times again |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
steavenr - thank you for such a close read, and I hope that my writing "has more levels." I try. Here are a few explanations: to christen you ... I was thinking, christen- to give name to for my spring is your ... spring- to come into existence Does this help? Thank you again for replying. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you Janette for sharing this poem, I like the spring too. yann |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a most sensous and tasty piece  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Janette, I'm sorry to hear about Chicagolands Studs Terkel passing away. Love Bobby |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
JamesMichael - thank you for your reply 2islander2 - "spring" ... my favorite too, a deep love coming into existence ... thank you for seeing that inkedgoddess - Thanks. You made me smile at your perceptions. Robert E. Jordan - I was never a listener/follower of Studs Terkel thus I needed a mind refresher as to his life. Studs Terkel, prize-winning author and radio broadcast personality, best remembered for his oral histories of common Americans. Terkel died peacefully in his Chicago home on Friday, October 31, 2008 at the age of ninety-six. "Take it easy, but take it." The sign-off line on his WFMT radio show An interesting motto that embodied his principles. Thank you for stating your sympathy. Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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