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silent stream |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
crooked blue, white-water drafting banks along a share-cropped row drifting dreams like dandelion spurs carries waters from fresh-fallen snow rippled blue, subtle waters stealing life from a liberty not yet sown sullied lot like a delta's dawning free-fall waters from a stream unknown soft-eyed blue, dripped waters sealing fates of life-times not yet loaned fresh from thoughts without emotion rushing o'er its stream-bed stones steam-mist blue, saddened by its luster lost on lives without the seeing sole possessor of nature's call serenely solving its own being and the painted sky draws a so clear course of the silent stream's subtle-soul source |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This gave me a soft feeling of freedom from physical restraints for the positive enjoyment of "life-times" from your "silent stream's subtle-soul source." Very interesting write here ... powerful. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Soul soothing thoughts and a lovely freedom. Ida |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm liking this blue of you Steven. Thank you. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Rought iron wirh cotton candy guy! N-joyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely imagery! ~Very much Enjoyed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are writing beauty. A |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Janette, so glad it touched you and spoke to you in such a powerful way...thanks for your comments Ida, nice of you to leave such insightful comments...thanks Sunshine, thank you...honored by your gracious remarks Dark, cool way of responding...taken appreciatively Artic, thank you so much Alison, I am honored by your comment...thank you kindly |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Steaven... you are one of my favourite poets on here and I so enjoyed this beautiful offering from you to us... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
RDB, I am humbled by your comment...thank you ever so much...my regards to you in the great 'down under' |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The mind wanders, sometimes rivers, sometimes streams...to mist. Fertile, the wetted lands we plant so close to the edges of our wishes. Cleansing, like after the rains. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, you have caught the essence of this...I am honored |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
A common theme captured in a fresh and captivating way. Words are also my soul's renewal. Thank you for yours. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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