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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-10-28 06:09 PM


No one loves Bones
the human person.  

Mom only loves
the money he brings in.  

She has no love for Bones
as a fellow human being.  

That’s pretty hard
for a kid to deal with.  

Bones is pretty much
a non-person.  

He’s just there.

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-10-28 06:33 PM


How very sad.
          Ida

Dark Star
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2 posted 2008-10-28 06:34 PM


=(
Janette
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3 posted 2008-10-28 07:20 PM


"a non-person."

Oh!  How very very sad.

Janette

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Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2008-10-28 07:28 PM


Unfortunately, sometimes it happens.  So not right!

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

steavenr
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5 posted 2008-10-28 07:31 PM


as a commodity...yes it is sad
Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-28 08:50 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

For your concern for bones--and people wonder why Bones sticks his tongue out at the world.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2008-10-28 08:53 PM


Yo Dark Star,

Bones thanks you for your frown of disapproval.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-10-28 08:56 PM


Thanks dear Janette,

Sadly some people haven’t recognized Bones as a person.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2008-10-28 08:58 PM


Thanks dear Ceinwyn,

You are correct, it does happen, and it's not right at all.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-10-28 09:01 PM


Thanks Steavenr,

No one wants to be treated as just a commodity.  There is much more to any human being.

Bobby

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