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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2008-10-28 09:04 AM



Steps along
the parquet miles

men and women
fill the mirror panarama

"pick a partner"

the caller calls

my eyes
find Ricardo
in his
Salsa posture

it's 8 on Monday

and I'm ready to go.

*from the Mermaid series*

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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2008-10-28 09:23 AM


Soemtimes after I run a pop in one of my Zumba DVD's...I love it..

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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2 posted 2008-10-28 09:23 AM


I will watch you dance and will put more lime in the salsa, just in case. Enjoyed it ms inki
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2008-10-28 01:48 PM


inkedgoddess - salsa time is always a good time...

BC

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2008-10-28 02:50 PM


I want to dance with Ricardo too me and my two left feet...lol

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2008-10-28 05:33 PM


Goddess, looking the way you do in your new photo, I would imagine there would be quite a line-up of men wanting to salsa with you!

Dance the night away!


Linda

steavenr
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6 posted 2008-10-28 06:07 PM


neat (if I might use that word)...an entire story complete with beautiful imagery in such few words
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2008-10-30 12:15 PM


Ricardo reminds me of lucy and Ricky!!    
but hey if he's got your number you gotta go with it.
Wowser, that's a very pretty picture, good goddess!!  uh huh, uh huh!!

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2008-10-30 07:20 AM


thanks kids for dancing with the beat
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2008-10-30 02:49 PM


This made me smile huge--as I remember the last time I was called upon to pick a dancing partner.

Um, I picked a guy on crutches so I could keep up with him!

O to just dance the salsa!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-11-01 12:09 PM


"and I'm ready to go."  wonderful...James
Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-11-01 01:08 PM


Wonderful Write Inked!


ARCTIC WIND

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12 posted 2008-11-01 01:54 PM


Nice,  what a way to get there.  thanx
for the read.

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