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a place where I have been
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a place where I have been |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
'tis a place where love can grow in simplicity and strength where souls are surely all aglow and commitment is measured by its length 'tis a place where hearts grow strong in existing for each the other where life is shared in hope and song and needs find rest in one another 'tis a place where faith awakens in promises both made and kept where dreams are simply not forsaken and fears are put to rest 'tis a place you say does not exist I know from experience, you insist well, I will only speak of where I've been and look to go there once again |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I know of this place you speak of, though I don't visit it as often as I should. And when I do, I feel so much better!! Enjoyed! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding write. Great lines... I especially loved the ending... me too. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Uplifting. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Artic, so glad you liked it Ceinwyn, always a good place to go...never can (as you probably know) go there enough...thanks for reading and commenting TD, thank you...glad it was a me-too write for you...appreciate the nice words Ida, glad you like 'uplifting'...I know I do...thanks |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
I like the idea of a secret heart, two loves tucked safely and warmly inside, Steaven! tb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We should all have a place such as this to escape to when we so desire and for me, I think season tickets for that journey would work best. Very much enjoyed. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"'tis a place where hearts grow strong in existing for each the other where life is shared in hope and song and needs find rest in one another" Oh! I hope to always live in such a place as this, and not just visit. A lovely write you have penned here. Enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - 'well, I will only speak of where I've been and look to go there once again' great poem, and touched by these words... BC |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
threadbear, your interpretation is beautiful...thank you for your comments Mark, I agree...with a place like that for all of us, things would probably go much better for all of us...thank you for your kind comments Janette, thank you so much...how does the old song go? a place for us...all of us need a place like that Bill, thanks for reading and commenting...glad you liked it |
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