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Autumn Love
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Autumn Love |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
A small leaf of colors grows on it's mother tree like I with my love Until the leaf is ready to leave to break free from its life Like I am with my Love To take the next step descending down from the tree Like I was with my Love Then it hit the ground doomed to die and turn brown and to be whisked away by the cold breeze of harsh departure.... My Love leaving me, making me fill empty like a fall leaf of existence Autumn Love |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was beautiful, I really liked it! ~ARH |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
O you know the leaf is just on a sojurn and will resurrect next Spring in another trees first bloom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An impressive, albeit sad, piece of metaphorical writing! Thank goodness for spring when new leaves burgeon with life on the tree of love!   EA |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
i enjoyed the metaphore in this sad but beautifully written piece. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write full of Emotion!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done though sad, so often then ending...welcome to the world of Passions. |
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