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Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2008-10-26 03:12 PM



I Remember
the day we met

I remember
the day we touched

I remember
the moment you said you love me

I remember
the day you left

I will keep remembering
forever and for always

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steavenr
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1 posted 2008-10-26 09:06 PM


ah...the echoes of memory...nice write
Ceinwyn
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2 posted 2008-10-26 09:14 PM


Memories never fade...this was bitter sweet...

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2008-10-26 10:29 PM


steavenr thanks dear


Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2008-10-26 10:30 PM


Cein

always.. and forever
thnkx

Juju
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In your dreams
5 posted 2008-10-26 10:38 PM


lovely sad

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2008-10-26 10:39 PM


I know, bitter sweet
thanks a bunch love


Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-10-26 10:50 PM


Some remember...some forget.
                      Ida

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
8 posted 2008-10-26 10:51 PM


I guess when it hurts, you would want to forget, but in some peoples cases,
they don't want to lose this feeling of Love they once had
thnx Ida

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
9 posted 2008-10-26 10:58 PM


I bet the pain is tough!~Well I hope all is well!!!!!!
~Touching Write Here~
Good Night to you and all


ARCTIC WIND

amusemi
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A State of Disarray
10 posted 2008-10-26 11:59 PM


Some loves are just too huge to be forgotten.  I sincerely hope this one remains a positive force for you and not the other option.

...k

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
11 posted 2008-10-27 03:09 PM


thnkx Artic
Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
12 posted 2008-10-27 03:10 PM


yes....

thnx Amusemi

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