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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-10-26 09:02 AM

copper metal morning without many smiles
the fog is only our saliva sliding
past the leather of my mindless mind
faster forward then when you were behind

and I see your eyes on the dawnset
like the breast mountains on an eastern
with that easy to climb recognition
but there are memories too, like footprints

perhaps the highway is the only unconditional
that I never have to RSVP to
with more than another handfull of throttle
and the moments of hesitation before heaven

I am sure of your curves, how they turn me
way beyond the on switch and past dangerous
but they change so often in the mornings
from where they were mentioned in evening

before we made our sin place shiverings

_______________

daark..(kinda owgish)

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

1 posted 2008-10-26 09:51 AM

I enjoyed your early morning reflections in this one.

By the way, I just had to ask - driving and, listening to OWG on Sirius channel 28? [your reference to --->(..(kinda owgish)] From the play list I think the best of the lot is "Won't Get Fooled Again - The Who."

Enjoyed!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

tsu
Junior Member

since 2008-10-20

Posts 29
u.k.

2 posted 2008-10-26 10:06 AM

i just love your highly charged observations on driving in this!

"i am sure of your curves,how they turn me
way beyond the on switch and past dangerous
but they change so often in the mornings
from where they were mentioned in evening"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2008-10-26 10:14 AM

you don't even know how much I miss the fog...can't wait to get back to it!

An early morning ride up the coast would be heaven

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-10-26 11:02 AM

Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-10-26 09:13 PM

"sin place shiverings"...interesting phrase...also exceptional imagery all throughout

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-10-27 05:01 AM

I am sure of your curves, how they turn me
way beyond the on switch and past dangerous
but they change so often in the mornings
from where they were mentioned in evening

hmmm.... yes Mr Daark.. you could be onto something here!

enjoyed this... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-10-27 06:24 AM

you guys bless me...thanks to each of you for your touch...this little harley ride is one of my favorite routes..guess it shows

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-11-03 03:43 AM

D

I smiled as I read this. I saw you.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-11-03 06:00 AM

thanks ms A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-11-03 07:09 AM

ah reading this again Mr Daark.. smiled my day... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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