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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2008-10-26 01:09 AM



Saturday night


If only love
could be this city,
on a Saturday night
the lights so pretty
I could forget
The places
Ive been



-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2008-10-26 04:54 AM


very enjoyable and thoughtful, thank you very much for this jewel.

  yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-10-26 07:54 AM


Juju... I always love your work

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-10-26 11:12 AM


I love night time in the BIG city!~ All the fast lights, and moving cars!

Wonderful Write!

ARCTIC WIND

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

4 posted 2008-10-26 08:39 PM


such a pensive nostalgia...excellent thought expressed well
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2008-10-26 08:41 PM


"take another little piece of my heart now baby"

Janis

This is perfection lovie.

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