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Janette

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since 2001-07-20

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0 posted 2008-10-25 12:13 PM

rapacity

the voice portrays a
woman's character
which permeates each
executed expression
with pretensions of
aimed captivation
thus his heart and soul
excuses rapacity

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-25 12:57 PM

if I understand this like you meant this, this is an exceptionally powerful write...like your word usage in this one...well done

Janette

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2 posted 2008-10-25 01:14 PM

steavenr

I think you do "get it."

It is a play on the theme of the Siren. (or any woman with a purpose I suppose) A siren's goal is to capture the man with her mere utterances, thus the man then can easily excuse his selfish, excessively greedy desire to possess her.

Thank you for taking the time to read me and respond.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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3 posted 2008-10-25 05:01 PM

And thus... he is held captive. You have a way of doing that! I like that about you. It's so nice to see you here Janette.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-10-25 09:03 PM

We haven't met! ~Enjoyed the Write

ARCTIC WIND

Janette

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5 posted 2008-10-26 05:31 PM

Larry C - you always leave the dearest or most surprising responses, which makes it so fun to hear from you, thanks. And ... [HUGS] back at you, too.

Artic Wind - how-do-you-doody to you too, and nice to meet you. And many thanks for the clapping!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2008-10-27 07:49 PM

Janette - you write with such exquisite taste, and much meaning with these words...

BC

Janette

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7 posted 2008-10-28 01:39 PM

Bill - "exquisite taste"
Oh! I do so enjoy the flavor of your response ... thank you ... I shall savor it. *wink*

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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