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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Espoused Clear cut, my ego from my being Hovered here, weightlessly Exploring your cheek with mine Let seconds pale into vapor Inhaled and exhaled together Let all words cease, all sound silence A bond that is more breath, than thought Still, as the waters of a pure soul Blend us, into one stream, joyous and unhampered Building volume and tempo, carving a channel forward Where I shimmer in your brilliance And you in mine Copyright Kkh 10/24/08 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
never have been disappointed in anything I've ever read from you, and this is no exception (exceptional, maybe) loved this phrase: "A bond that is more breath" |
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tsu Junior Member
since 2008-10-20
Posts 29u.k. |
i really like this - "..as the waters of a pure soul blend us, into one stream, joyous and umhampered.." beautiful lines,a simply gorgeous poem. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Still, as the waters of a pure soul....." Wonderful Write TD!  ARCTIC WIND |
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