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Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07
Posts 82


0 posted 2008-10-24 03:47 PM


"Broke"

No money
A lot of ambition
No opportunities
While living in a garbage economy
I'm broke

Debt up to my knees
Bill collectors looking for me
Gas tank is barely above up E
Can't afford to finish pursuing my degree
I'm broke

Bank account is drained
No health insurance
I hope I don't get sick or go insane
No jobs
Plenty of layoffs
I'm broke

Back against wall
I'm tired
Because no food has hit my stomach walls
Times are hard
But I will survive through it all
Even though
I'm broke

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steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-24 04:06 PM


good description of a sad condition, but your ending is worth it all...it's rich
2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2008-10-24 04:47 PM


Hi SP , thank you for sharing, I hope things will go better soon. Enjoyed the reading.

regards

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-10-24 05:33 PM


Hope things improve for you, Street Poet.
I've been there.
                                 Ida

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2008-10-24 05:48 PM


Street Poet - yep, been there. Keep plugging, as things will eventually change, they always do in time...

BC

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