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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2008-10-24 12:11 PM


Indecision
By Paul Wilson

Indecision
standing at the edge
of reality

Wondering  
What to do

Make your move
the wind whispers
thru the stars

Retreat
Or stand your ground

Conceived in darkness
before the Sun
was born

Spinning round and round
Stars control your destiny

Heart cries
tears never fall
in release

Control your emotions
within the realm of your being

Tomorrows escape
within your reach
just don’t get attached

Days are numbered
who will be next

Flame getting dimmer
unable to exist
without your dreams

Conceived in darkness
destroyed by the light

Emptiness all around
the last one
to know

Nothing left
In this world

Feelings swallowed
by the ocean
Dreams erased
by the obvious

Indecision



~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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XOx Uriah xOX
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1 posted 2008-10-24 03:07 PM


For me, deciding that I cannot decide is always a fun decision.

As far as  "Stars control your destiny"...
I am often amused by conversations in which someone declares they have "Freewill" and then later says, "Let me check my Horoscope"

::smiles::    I'm rambling

I've decided I like this

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2 posted 2008-10-24 03:12 PM


ah, sweet Paullie. I've missed you...

Indecision--I just can't decide.

*smile*

Have I gotten in more trouble doing nothing while I think things over eternally, or ...

I guess I'll never know.





Thank you for the thought-prompt, you!


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3 posted 2008-10-24 03:30 PM


seems I was just where you were describing...you got the aura of the emotions down well...enjoyed
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2008-10-24 03:39 PM


Paul - indecision, just like procrastination, every time I do it costs... Nice to see you...

BC

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5 posted 2008-10-24 03:59 PM


"Control your emotions
within the realm of your being"

So very difficult to accomplish, thus for me it breeds indicision and procrastination. *wink*

Enjoyed!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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6 posted 2008-10-24 04:34 PM


Wow, Paul. I guess that one said a lot. I feel similar, and seem to often make the wrong decision when there is an obvious one to be made. You sure expressed well, a discouraged feeling, the one that sits on my shoulder right now.
Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2008-10-24 05:40 PM


Uriah...Laughing at your reply. Enjoyed the humor...Paul

Karen...Glad you gave this some thought, and acted on your feelings. I guess we all have to sometime even if we are wrong, but if we never decide we can never be wrong. I'm confussed...Paul

steavenr...I hope everything turns out good. Thanks for the reply...Paul

Bill...Procrastinating is my middle name I believe. thanks for taking time to read and reply...Paul

Janette...You are so right. Thanks for the reply...Paul

Catalinamoon...So glad you could relate to this. Glad to hear from you, I haven't seen you around here in awhile, so that makes your reply extra nice...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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