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Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

0 posted 2008-10-24 12:08 PM

I know

I took my time
in responding
but there has been
many long years
of dead silence

seasons of drought
that sped through me
resulting in
a flood that time
cannot erase

your lingering presence

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-24 03:07 PM

love the structure...lots of cool phrases...very well done for an excellent read

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-10-24 03:41 PM

Janette - written from the heart, loved the message...

BC

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2008-10-24 04:42 PM

I enjoy the deep simplicity of it all ....Thank you for sharing...

yann

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2008-10-24 05:08 PM

loved it Janette...so good to see and read you again~~

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-10-25 06:44 PM

wonderful...James

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-10-25 09:04 PM

I loved the ending! Just poetic !!

ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2008-10-25 11:51 PM

i like this..it's lovely and haunting

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

8 posted 2008-10-26 05:23 PM

Thank you ALL for taking the time to read this and especially for the encouraging responses.

Smiling in appreciation,
Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2008-10-26 11:13 PM

one wants to say so much yet knows not how to say them. i have been there. not a good feeling.

cool write!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-10-27 07:06 AM

Janette.. this is just beautiful!

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

11 posted 2008-10-27 12:43 PM

ah, y'been gone too long miss thang!

It's great to see you again lovie.

And not to worry, I take my time responding too.

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