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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
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0 posted 2008-10-24 02:18 AM



faith
neatly
strung together
like a rosary

I give you
my hopes
my dreams
my love
my life

I surrender

I can no longer do this alone
I thought I had the strength
but I am nothing
without you

I wandered blind
in the dark
for too long

now

I kneel before you

only

you

and

no one else

can

save me


The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

© Copyright 2008 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2008-10-24 10:47 AM


My little Tinkerbell! God loves you! ~ and so do I! (for what that's worth! lol)

This is definitely a

You spiritual poetry always touches me deeply!

Love & God's Light,
Linda

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-24 03:11 PM


strong opening...a write definitely worth pondering over...going back to read again
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