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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
silken shades of light's debris scatter shards of illuminosity soft it falls on lovers twain gilding a silent, safron refrain with blue of eyes and moon-lit brown it spreads its radiance all around and eyes of yes meet nods of same the wild of love it cannot tame so rose of cheek yields its satin soul as words bespeak their heart-warmed goal he holds her tight with tender charms she holds him close within her arms while silken shades of light's debris host their love-fest for eternity |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An hourglass curve, holding precious the moments best savored warm. You write romance so well.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very nice. I've been eyeing up the couplets thing for a bit, and this is a lovely example for me to study. Thank you steavenr. Enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rhyming Couplets on couplings! Very apropos! "he holds her tight with tender charms she holds him close within her arms" ~ Perfectly loverly!  Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Just the right amount of romance, perfect. Ida |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I enjoyed this accumulation of "shades of light's debris" Charmingly romantic, just the way I like it. Enjoyed! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful romance with beautiful words, i enjoyed the serenity of it all. yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, thank you so much...thought it looked better centered and never even gave it another thought serenity, so glad this gives you something to study & look at...I am honored...the title was just a play on words for the form Linda, glad you liked that line...it sorta just tumbled out like that and after I read it a couple of times, I left it and liked it too Ida, never thought of it like that, but nice thought about just the right amount of romance Janette, thank you...the accumulation was just my attempt to tie it all together...thanks for noticing yann, good romance always has an aspect of serenity in it...thank you for your gracious comment vandana, appreciate your reading and commenting |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Steaven, that is such a sweet tender poem and very romantic. Well written. Take care. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Lindsay, I appreciate the very kind comments...thank you |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I always enjoy your poetic poems! This was double the good~!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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