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Open Poetry #43

My Special Plant.

Newpoet
Member

since 2008-05-16

Posts 72

0 posted 2008-10-22 05:15 PM

When my plant grew fast,
I was excited.

When I smoked from it,
I was delighted.

When an ash fell into my couch,
The house ignited.

When the flames roared in the sky,
The town united. Delighted.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2008-10-22 05:48 PM

OK, I'll bite, Was the town delighted that your house burnt down, or because you had a lot of plants that when burning, make people happy?

Be mellow, Man, And go get something to munch on.

tabme
Junior Member

since 2008-10-03

Posts 37
Mississippi

2 posted 2008-10-22 07:50 PM

XD great.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2008-10-22 08:25 PM

smile...

I've been reading your stuff and I find your use of couplets both interesting and effective.

The implications of what ain't said is intriguing as well.

Enjoyed.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-10-22 08:38 PM

Yo Newpoet,

I get it. They enjoyed the fumes from the house.

These plants were grow indoors, right.

Bobby

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-10-22 10:24 PM

had to smile, but still not sure if I'm supposed to

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