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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-10-22 04:21 PM


Bones can’t quite get over it.  
For his whole life,
he’s never really had a friend.  

Oh, he’s had people
that he called friends,
but they really weren’t friends.  

They were people
that rented him for a while.  
He hated them.  

Then he discovered Griselda.  

Griselda actually likes him,
for just being him.  

She is his first real friend,
and he loves her.

Bobby

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-22 04:48 PM


Griselda was a precious gift in Bones' life, some sweetness in too much bitterness. Good to learn that he knew the emotions of his heart and was requited.

You conveyed this little flame well, dear Bobby.

Love,
Margherita


Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-10-22 06:58 PM


Thanks dear Margherita,

Yes, Griselda is going to make a big difference in Bones'es life.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-10-23 12:00 PM


Robert E. Jordan - It's great when a friend becomes more, like Griselda...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-10-23 12:15 PM


Thanks Bill,

What you say is very true.

Bobby

viking_metal
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5 posted 2008-10-23 09:32 AM


Everybody needs a Griselda.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-23 10:40 AM


Thanks Paul,

What you say is very true.  Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bobby

2islander2
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7 posted 2008-10-23 10:56 AM


Happily there are Griselda in this world...Thank you for sharing.


yann

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-10-23 12:56 PM


Thanks Yann,

I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem about Griselda.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-10-24 01:30 AM


Bones deserves a Griselda.
                    Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2008-10-24 10:30 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

Griselda and Bones deserve each other.  The work well together.

Love Bobby

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