navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Time To Start Anew
Open Poetry #43
Post A Reply Post New Topic Time To Start Anew Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-10-22 11:34 AM




Time To Start Anew

Such a talented guy
Use your creativity
Turn your life around
You have the ability

You must remember
To yourself be true
I know you can do it
As I believe in you

With continued hope
No matter the climb
Know it can be done
One step at a time

Endless possibilities
Are waiting for you
Rid those old habits
Time to start anew


Hope ©2008


© Copyright 2008 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2008-10-22 02:40 PM


A wonderful poem of care and encouragement here Hope, to who ever this is sent to, that person would be more motivated to try harder and do better. Loved it.

Rick

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-10-22 04:29 PM


Yo dear HopeS,

This poem has good end rhymes, and a lovely picture.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-10-22 05:12 PM


This is beautiful and wise too, dear Hope!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Newpoet
Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72

4 posted 2008-10-22 05:22 PM


I loved this poem. Optimism at its best!
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2008-10-22 06:14 PM


HopeS - it's truly amazing what can happened when one finally decides to start anew. Good write...

BC

tabme
Junior Member
since 2008-10-03
Posts 37
Mississippi
6 posted 2008-10-22 07:39 PM


inspiring.  
steavenr
Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

7 posted 2008-10-22 10:20 PM


great advice...beautiful picture...well-written verse...exceptional
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #43 » Time To Start Anew

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary