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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2008-10-29 05:42 AM



You told me,  we were like twins
One soul, two bodies
Your kiss sealed my broken dreams
You placed  my hand over your heart
I shed a tear, you wiped it away
Your lips curled back in a smile,
while you brushed my hair away from my brow
"Why are you crying?" you asked
I turned away, you pulled back my hair behind my ear
and whispered softly, "Come here and let me see those baby blues."
I turned back, hot breath on your neck
I traced your face with my finger tips,
while I pressed my lips against yours in a passionate kiss
I pulled back, only for you to pull me in closer
My lips lingered towards your ear, slightly touching
Hot breath whispering, "Because, it's only a dream."


The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

© Copyright 2008 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Stacey011
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1 posted 2008-10-29 07:43 AM


That's beautiful. I felt like I was actually there. Very good visualisation!
Janette
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2 posted 2008-10-29 12:21 PM


Only a dream?

Still ... sweetly romantic.

Enjoyed!

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-10-29 06:28 PM


Sweet sweet Dreams~ How can we live without them?


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-10-30 05:32 AM


Kristen... I like your dreams!   lovely writing here... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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5 posted 2008-11-01 07:40 PM


Hey Kris,

Dreams are simply a prelude to reality.  Look in your tea leaves and see the beauty of your future.

Hang in there, girly.

xooxxo
Ali

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6 posted 2008-11-04 06:38 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
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