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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio

0 posted 2008-10-21 01:45 PM



Without notification,
they fall

the sky
the choreographer

and the caligraphy
is stark
against its whitefaced walls

much like us
kickin em up

without orchestration
or benefit
of concert halls

just in love with the leaves

intoxication
by inhalation

bronze and berry
mauve and cherry

and colors not yet claimed
or named, endless streams

and pennies are pitched
on a faithful man's dreams

it's morning magentas

on cinnamon squares

we are
born again
children

shedding our fears.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-22-2008 07:20 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2008-10-21 02:08 PM


Always did love your cookin ms inky
steavenr
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2 posted 2008-10-21 03:38 PM


"and pennies are pitched
on a faithful man's dreams"

neat line, but I must confess...was really looking for cinnabuns...nice fall descriptions

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2008-10-21 04:00 PM


Delicious, inkedgoddess.
                    Ida

WTBAKELAR
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4 posted 2008-10-21 04:05 PM


Tell me this is not about cooking, but the annual falling of the leaves.  I absolutely loved it, right up to the last leaf standing.

""and colors not yet claimed
or named,""      great line.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-10-21 04:06 PM


quote:
and colors not yet claimed
or named, endless streams



You are one FINE poetess, dear Michele.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2008-10-21 06:18 PM


I would highlight the same line Margherita did, for I've always seen in-between colors/hues that didn't fit the usual color nomenclature.
Enjoyed.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2008-10-21 09:59 PM


inkedgoddess - lovely, just lovely, always did like your writings...

BC

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
8 posted 2008-10-22 07:56 AM


beautiful
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
9 posted 2008-10-22 11:32 AM


.


Now this is very very good.

Would like to add it
to my Word File of poems by
others.  If yes, what name
shall I attach to it?

I don't give gifts . . .
This is very good.

John

.

Janette
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10 posted 2008-10-25 12:50 PM


"and pennies are pitched
on a faithful man's dreams"

Luscious.  I enjoyed the taste of this one, it goes so well with this breezy fall day.

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
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Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-10-25 08:58 PM


Enjoyed the Write Ink!


ARCTIC WIND

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
12 posted 2008-10-25 11:16 PM


thanks guys and dolls for leafing along with me
Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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VA
13 posted 2008-10-27 08:17 PM


"we are
born again
children

shedding our fears"

I loved it all, but the end went straight to my heart

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
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Ohio
14 posted 2008-10-28 08:39 AM


thanks again for stopping by
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
15 posted 2008-10-28 09:09 AM


"and colors not yet claimed
or named, endless streams"

not yet claimed or named...

much like emotion and sometimes people.

Loved this.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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