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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-10-20 11:46 AM


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Past my window
In an autumn wind—

A blizzard of leaves


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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-21-2008 01:10 AM).]

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2islander2
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-10-20 01:48 PM


always few but wonderful words.

yann

steavenr
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2 posted 2008-10-20 04:22 PM


so many sights and sounds conjured by so few words...shaking my head, wondering out loud...feeling very inadequate in the presence of such skill...nice
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