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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-10-20 07:02 AM


there are curtains in the sky
that a lover looks around
and under sometimes

when they are walking by tomorrow
wondering what is inside
and if there is room for another

or is it better just to watch
and not get any on you
due to the addictions of something new

that has never been touched before
and would those others talk too
if they saw the smiles there

on the mouths of two imperfect strangers


_____________

daark

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-21 04:12 PM


I love to look beyond those curtains in the sky too ... and I do love your incomparable poetic creativity.

quote:
... imperfect strangers
!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

WTBAKELAR
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2 posted 2008-10-21 04:16 PM


I think Margherita hit it spot on.

""incomparable poetic creativity.""

Those are the words to describe your writing.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2008-10-21 05:14 PM


and all this time I thought the clouds were winking at me to warn me of the stars ... hmmmm

Always a pleasure to read you and your unique perceptions.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2008-10-21 07:05 PM


ms mar...thanks lady of smiles

___________

WT...thanks so much


________________

Mark, thank you amigo..you bless me

Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
5 posted 2008-10-22 10:47 AM


This is special and beautiful -- and I saved it.

A

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