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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-10-19 08:46 AM



they were the long moments of seduction
when there were dove sounds in your eyes
and once was almost enough for those urges
but you always wondered what ruin meant

you were distant too often there
behind your busy with the long sleeves
and him too, being used as an excuse
for keeping your heart in that box of boxes

perhaps it was just the nectar we tasted
on each others thought lipped mouths
when we read lines between our lines
in our own special kind of mckuen

although he would have blushed some
being used that way so seldom and often
so just in case you might forget sometime
when you come here to look through windows

I never have,  and mostly always will
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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-19 03:26 PM



quote:
they were the long moments of seduction
when there were dove sounds in your eyes




You, dear D., are the master of seduction with your poetry.

Every line exercises this power. And contradictions are part of the game.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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2 posted 2008-10-19 04:04 PM


D,

Peeking through open windows makes window peeking much more inviting.  You write whisper words.

A

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2008-10-19 08:59 PM


I never have,  and mostly always will


You are the first the last and the everything man
love ya

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-10-20 05:47 AM


ms mar, thanks lady friend


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ms ali-san, thanks little one


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ms inky..thanks babe for the tickle

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