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Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-10-17 11:37 AM


Bones know
what suburban streets
are like.  

He’s been taken
to the burbs
many nights.  

He’s always surprised
how empty, and dead
the streets are in the burbs.  

Bones doesn’t think
that he could live
in a place like that.

Bobby

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1 posted 2008-10-17 12:11 PM


I've seen neighborhoods like that, near total silence, no action after midnight. It really is very different from inner city streets.
I like something in between, fairly quiet, but not graveyard silence.

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-10-17 01:58 PM


Thanks dear Kacy,

If it goes quite at night, I have trouble going to sleep.  It's all in what you're used to.

Love Bobby

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