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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-10-17 06:14 AM



    
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Today through the rain

heaven's drums sent a refrain

hearts stirred to love's call

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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-10-17 11:19 AM


Yo dear Margherita,

The idea is there in this effort.

bobby

steavenr
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2 posted 2008-10-17 03:29 PM


beautifully descriptive...enjoyed
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2008-10-17 03:46 PM


Margherita - I love the rain, especially on a Sunday morning, however, it's been raining here on and off forever it seems. I may build an ark soon... Very nice write...

BC

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-10-17 05:08 PM


Ouah Margherita, I can feel the beat of the drums, enjoyed your delicious haiku...

regards


  yann

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5 posted 2008-10-18 12:27 PM


What an incredible photograph.  What a lovely haiku.  You did well, my friend.  Very beautiful partnership.

xoxoxo
Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-10-18 05:10 AM


'sigh' ... so very very lovely my dear Margherita!   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2008-10-18 10:47 AM


You find the nicest pictures to go with your haikus.

Love this, especially the sound of the drum beat.


poddarku
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8 posted 2008-10-19 06:01 AM


A call from within
telling me to tell this time
love has many forms.
Sorry! I just could not stop to write this. Your poetry is so spiritual.

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9 posted 2008-10-19 12:40 PM


good one
Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-10-21 03:48 PM




This is so lovely Margherita!!!!


ARCTIC WIND

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11 posted 2008-10-21 09:15 PM



Loved it dear Margherita as always.

Lindsay

Margherita
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12 posted 2008-10-22 07:00 AM


Thank you all from my heart for your warm replies!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2008-10-22 07:21 AM


Love heaven's drums when the sound stirs
the soul as this does

Honeybunch
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14 posted 2008-10-22 02:22 PM


Dear Margherita - I can't believe I missed this. What a stunning picture and so very well complemented with your words.  You are the rain through which comes insight and wisdom.


Helen

Rick
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15 posted 2008-10-22 02:37 PM


Dear Margherita, enjoyed the words here, thank you for sharing my friend.

Rick

The Lady
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16 posted 2008-10-22 02:50 PM



a perfect jewel of haiku Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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17 posted 2008-10-22 04:06 PM


excellent 'poetic' and photographic images!

applause for this 'penning'!

Margherita
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18 posted 2008-10-22 05:14 PM


Thank you, dear friends, I enjoyed your kind and warm replies.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

shortsleeves
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19 posted 2008-11-10 01:10 PM


The beat of consciousness.
Love,
Hal

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20 posted 2008-11-10 06:02 PM


ing this one dear Margherita! ~ Excellent write..... mmhmm


ARCTIC WIND

americangothic
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21 posted 2008-11-12 09:14 AM


I am not too skilled with haiku's...but you nailed this one
Earth Angel
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22 posted 2008-11-12 11:25 AM


Margherita Dolphina, I shall never again hear thunder and not think of you and your divine referenc to it as "heaven's drums"!

A love-ly haiku!



Angelo Terrestre

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