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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2008-10-15 04:28 AM


A hankering

is hungering

it is growing fangs of smile

my wanting

it is haunting

greed

I am shadow-stepping miles

down this way

and then

up that

the canyons

and the deep salt flats

I'm wandering

walking

(wall-KING!)

The bright lights

are not where I'm at...

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Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2008-10-15 12:15 PM


I miss you.

can I walk with you awhile?



love you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

The Lady
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2 posted 2008-10-16 01:50 PM




I hear your hankering deep in the canyons
blowing across the deep salt flats

XOx Uriah xOX
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3 posted 2008-10-16 02:06 PM


::lick::      ::smiles::
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2008-10-16 08:42 PM


ah...another recurring dream of mine.

I'm walking in my dreams. All night long...

with no apparent destination, no particular goal and I never seem to get tired. Until I wake up.

I'm just...walking.

(anybody care to play Freud?) ?

Thanks for reading.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2008-10-17 07:53 AM


Maybe it's about all the things you aren't doing as you walk.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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6 posted 2008-10-18 12:46 PM


I want to wander the salt flats with you.  

A

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