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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 One By One One by one, the leaves fall in peaceful decent. ~ Twirling and swirling in the fresh, crisp autumn air Brilliant colors dance in the wind. ~ Orange and yellow, and gold and red. One by one they fall ARCTIC WIND |
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blackrosepetal New Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 7NY, USA |
what a relaxing poem...i likeit. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
removed [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (10-14-2008 10:26 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Black Rose Petal! WELCOME TO PIP!!!   Thank you for clicking ARCTIC WIND |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Good to read you, Artic Wind~ Love the way you wrote the colors of Autumn in full bloom!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Robert! Thanks for the suggestion, but I think the orange gives such contrast to the poem. I just think that If I change it, the poem is missing an important part, but I will keep your suggestion into consideration. I will keep on thinking LOL Thanks a lot for reading my poem, it means a lot  ARCTIC WIND |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very pretty in the spirit of the season |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
HEY RONIECE!!!! ~ It's been so long since I've talked to you. How has it been, I hope that your trip was amazing, and I hope you had so much fun. Did you eat a lot of fancy cuisine???? When ever I leave home, I make sure I have foods I would never be able to eat at home! Thank you for clicking on my poem! I hope you have a wonderful day!  to youARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Mz.Bluez Hey dearest poetess! Thank you so much for reading my poem!! It means a lot to me!! I absolutely love talking about fall, just beauty ! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Inked Goddess Hi Goddess! Thank you for reading! ~I always enjoy reading your poems as well~ to youARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It's good to see you back again Michael with your beautiful autumn picture and delightful poem. much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love fall, AW. Thank you for this. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a pure delight: the presentation is perfect and the feeling it conveys brings joy and peace. I wish we could all sit on the ground under the trees and just watch the falling leaves, as they dance their last dance for us and show us how NOT to cling but just how to enjoy the beauty of being and also the beauty of letting go ... I enjoyed this greatly, dear Michael. It is magical. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
AC - I wish all the things in my life would fall one by one and not all at once and, believe you me, they're not all as colourful as autumn leaves. Enjoyed your words! Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lindsay! it feels good to be back! Missed y'all thanks so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael Thanks ARCTIC WIND Happy Fall |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita, You may do whatever you want under the tree of autumn!~Enjoy  to youHappy fall ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Alison, sorry I missed ya! Thanks so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sweetest of all Honey!--Helen~ Everything will all turn out okay, and everything will be what you want in time-- because just like seasons, in time, mother nature will give life once again to youARCTIC WIND |
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