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The ache of love
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The ache of love |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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And as the silence of renewal o’er lays what used to be I look back and remember love with a deep embedded ache. It’s a pain of such intensity no one should have to bear but it doesn’t grow to overtake the forward movement of a life like a shattered spinal column keeps one immobilised. It’s simply there like skin and hair to be moisturized and brushed when it starts to dry and crack and become unmanageable. But no one says, “Ah-ha, I see you’ve creamed and put asunder what night has brought again to light from the dark of daily life.” We just daily groom it out of sight like something meant to be and even I can’t stay as love when embroiled in life’s betrayal. So then the ache embedded deep becomes something we refuse to feel and mind the victor once again takes a bow on centre stage ~ and all of this is meant to be so the prophets say. But prophets, sages, and the like are really just like you and me finding grace within the night and dispelling it in daily life! Helen / 13 October 2008 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ EVERYTHING you pen has such a real-of-feel in it~ 'prophets, sages, and the like are really just like you and me finding grace within the night and dispelling it in daily life!' How the uniqueness of your thoughts reaches out and touches me in some way or another~ Bless you this day~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: May you overcome this pain and move ahead on the Path of life where without any doubt you will encounter new gifts of love and joy, dear Helen. You always write beautifully and move me. Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Marge, I think of you so often and hold you in my prayers. Thank you for your comment. I could reply "none so touched as me" but the jocular manner of my words may not come over as intended. Here's a smile anyway ...  Look after yourself.My dear Margherita, Thank you for always reading and for your so gracious comments. I wish you peace in the home. Love Helen |
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