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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-10-12 03:49 AM



Malik
when my thoughts turn to you
the kindness in your eyes
will shine through
and the goodness
of your heart
will smile my days

And my smiles will be because of you...


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-10-12 04:04 AM


... and as you share it with us it becomes a chain of smiles and brings a sunray to many.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-10-12 04:27 AM


thanks dear Margherita.. you are truly beautiful and bring smiles to us here always on our pages blue... thank you for being you!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-10-12 04:30 AM


Beautiful and heartwarming!

- Owl

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-10-12 04:31 AM


Owl... thank you ... you warm my heart with your lovely words..
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2008-10-12 03:48 PM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce - from the smile I see in your photo it's a nice one. Enjoyed...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-10-12 09:24 PM


Yo dear RDB,

Who is this Malik person, should Bones be jealous?

Paris is of course a great town.  I still have a pen I bought there 20+ years ago.

Love Bobby

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7 posted 2008-10-13 02:12 AM


Ramble on, my friend.  Please, ramble on.

xooxox

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
8 posted 2008-10-13 08:30 PM


Enjoyed the thought and simple beauty~

Nicely done, good poetess~

Oklahoma Rose
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9 posted 2008-10-13 10:09 PM


Oh how beautiful!
2islander2
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10 posted 2008-10-14 12:55 PM


Hi Roniece, may be he can read this....He deserves to do so....Thank you for the beautiful poem...


yann

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2008-10-14 11:13 PM


thank you all... your comments are just so lovely   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2008-10-15 02:34 AM


Silky...James
Honeybunch
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13 posted 2008-10-15 12:42 PM


Written for a special person by a special lady!  Your words are special, Roniece!  May you keep smiling.

Love
Helen

The Lady
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14 posted 2008-10-15 02:27 PM




ahhhh tell us more Roniece
I love your Paris ramblings


Rick
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15 posted 2008-10-15 02:28 PM


Dear Roniece to carry that smile and hold such memories is a blessing in deed, thank you for sharing my friend, I am smiling too.

Rick

LindsayP
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16 posted 2008-10-15 10:36 PM



And I am smiling too dear Roniece, I was positive that I had responded to your sweet

poem, it shows your happiness. well done love to you my friend.

Lindsay

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