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It's Sunday!
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It's Sunday! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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She stares into the distance looking for the truth of soul and angels, fairies, witches, gnomes, and foreign entities. The sky is clear, there’s no despair, or inner anxiousness and yet a thick and heavy haze o’er lays her scenic route and she stumbles lost and weary in the middle of it all. Suddenly the sun but, of course, it’s only love shining through discrepancies between what’s seen and felt and she finds her way again for a moment more-or-less. Sometimes more and sometimes less; moments are eternal gifts and our choice to maximise or shrink each moment that we live but of choice she knows to let it lie with angels, fairies, witches, gnomes, or foreign entities in accordance with belief as to their validity. She chooses angels now today for angels are the truth of soul when vision and emotion fly together hand in hand in the creative consciousness of every human being. But it’s Sunday and she’s lost for a moment more-or-less! Helen / 12 October 2008 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Helen... this is beautiful writing... remember to 'breathe' my lovely friend, it will help you to smile again.. love and hugs to you .. RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... her choice of Angels makes me nod. May the moments of sunshine/love stretch into hours and make you feel good, dear Helen. Wonderfully written piece. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Roniece - thank you. I think most of us can smile through turmoil and breathe through it. Aren't we a completely fantastic creation? Margherita - Thanks and I guess feeling good is a state of mind and one which I have chosen. It works very well except when someone is threatening my life and that of my son. At times like this it helps to believe in karma. He will get what's due to him! Love Helen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybunch - great writing, enjoyed the read... BC |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you so much, BC! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Suddenly the sun but, of course, it’s only love shining through discrepancies between what’s seen and felt and she finds her way again for a moment more-or-less. Sometimes more and sometimes less; moments are eternal gifts~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh oh oh, you are so lovely, Lady Sunday~ and this is a very special gift! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, dear Lori. It could be that I write for you on a Sunday because I always think of you when doing so. Your term of "Lady Sunday" has stuck with me for some years now. Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Sundays are not my favorite, they are usually the most quiet day of the week!~ Enjoyed the Write Dearest Helen  ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sunday was a good day for writing, Helen. Enjoyed this very much. Ida |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Helen my dear that is such a great write, Thanks so much for sharing, Love to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so very much and AC - I don't like Sundays much either but I do know each day is how we make it and I try my best to be grateful for them. It's a challenge I've set myself. Helen |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"shining through discrepancies" I was stopped cold by this phrase...great write |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned! Theresia |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
That is very true Helen!! ~Happy Birthday again! ARCTIC WIND |
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