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TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

0 posted 2008-10-09 11:07 AM

october noon and all is well
the poplar turns the whippoorwill
the pansies rest their pretty heads
among the scattered flower beds
sumac berries staining clothes
silken petals on the rose
goldenrod lets down her hair
autumn hanging in the air

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2008-10-09 11:10 AM

Hi Tina, this is delicious, I would so much like to see automn in America...

have a nice day

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2008-10-09 07:51 PM

Beautiful as always, Tina.
Ida

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-10-09 08:15 PM

Dear Tina that is one cute poem
with great rhyming, loved it.

Lindsay

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-10-09 10:51 PM

Tina~
Your thoughts are so original ... so unique ... so totally lovely~
Gosh .. how much I adore this ..~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

5 posted 2008-10-10 05:57 PM

love the way this just tumbles off the lips...exquisite in word and in essence...specially delectable (someone already used 'delicious'

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-10-11 12:30 PM

Tina,

I am saving this one - it's wonderful.

xoxoxox
A

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-10-11 08:41 PM

Very very lovely, indeed!

Love,
Margherita

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

8 posted 2008-10-14 11:35 AM

Thanks all

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-10-14 06:36 PM

Enjoyed the Lovely write Tina!

ARCTIC WIND

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2008-10-15 12:02 PM

A thoroughly enjoyable Autumn fling read!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2008-10-15 02:16 PM

oh Tina
this is so perfect!

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