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Lonely Days and Nights
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Lonely Days and Nights |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA 
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Lonely Days and NightsThose first few years return with memories |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A lovely sonnet Makes me want to try one of these again It's not as easy as it looks Keep it up, Poetess liz |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Oklahoma Rose - nice touching write, I did feel your words when reading... BC |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSue~ Such a melancholy, poignant penning ... we often turn back to the way we wish things were ... these sound like such wonderful times and it is easy to get lost in them~ Yes ... it is easy to wrap ourselves in the warmth of the love that remembers us well~ Beautiful, sweets~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A soulful sonnet from our Sweet Sue! Loverly, indeed! Your pen has been full of surprises as of late! It's good to see the poetess stretching her poetic wings!  Love to you! Linda |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've expressed yourself beautifully - Sonnets really are the best, aren't they? And, they're just so darned romantic by nature. Nicely done, Rose..  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A beautiful sonnet in all respects. The content pulls at the reader perfectly and of course the sheer format is a smooth read throughout. Wonderfully done. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A lovely sonnet~~ M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The days are long and lonely without you My nights are longer still as night draws near My heart longs to be near you once again Tonight my thoughts are all on you my dear That is such a sweet poem dear Sue, so much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Thank you all for your very kind comments. To me they are very encouraging words. Thank you, again. |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
This is lovely. It makes you have one special person in mind. Simply amazing. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a touching write Indeed, Always think in the positive and never in the negative! ARCTIC WIND |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Smooth reading, absolutely lovely! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh so beautiful. Wonderful job. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very poignant write. Beautifully rendered longing. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Just wishing you were here with me tonight With you the world around me feels so right oh my sweet Sue... these are very beautiful heart longing words.. sending some of my warm smiles for your day.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
anyone who has missed someone they love knows what you are saying, and you have captured it well...excellent write and as others have said, beautiful sonnet |
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