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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 10-06-2008 06:02 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I often looked at the ground from angles
while leaning against your back
and listing to your voice water
knowing your perfume too often
when someone else wore it pretending

but I knew they were not you
even when I touched you through them
and heard your soul make that music
like our hands did holding
just the moments between us

I oiled our footprints in the sand
so if I reused them on occasion
it wouldn't wake you
each time I passed and waited
with my arm extended for yours

in case there was something we never said
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daark
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 10-06-2008 06:04 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

mmmmm.... Mr Daark you make me melt!
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 10-06-2008 06:25 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms r&b...that makes me smile...thanks ms
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3 posted 10-11-2008 10:33 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
but I knew they were not you
even when I touched you through them
and heard your soul make that music



I love to find gems like this one!

Intensely beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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4 posted 10-11-2008 10:47 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

feeling wrapped in your words
as they lead me to magical streams
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 10-12-2008 06:31 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar, thanks lady friend


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ms inky...you make me smile babe, thanks
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ARCTIC WIND
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 10-14-2008 09:46 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks AW
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8 posted 10-15-2008 09:33 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

sigh

because you've left me rendered helpless
to do anything else.  

tis a pleasure to read you again DarKdaddy.
hugs n peace ~D

"In yearning for nothing, you will be free to enjoy what you do, free to see the patterns, free to hear the music in all things."
-Barbara Ann Kipfer
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9 posted 10-15-2008 09:51 AM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

each time I passed and waited
with my arm extended for yours

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I love it when you get all soft and sentimental like that!
You keep rhythm with my heart when you write this way.
Dark Stranger
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10 posted 10-15-2008 10:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms donna thanks so much babe.

__________

Ms bluezy, you make me wanna (wink) thanks lady
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11 posted 10-07-2010 01:58 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

while leaning against your back
and listing to your voice water
knowing your perfume too often
when someone else wore it pretending


as I said before... deft...

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 10-07-2010 04:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks amigo...
Earl Brinkman
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Cpat Hair also found the best part of the poem!
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 10-14-2010 06:23 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thank you eb
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