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In Foreign Valley
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In Foreign Valley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In Foreign Valley In a valley a river diced through fields filled with luscious rice. There lived a woman that loved a man decades ago in Japan. Came a war the man was called in foreign valley he gave his all. Still today she warmly remembers him this precious woman loving a man. JamesLee 27October 2008 |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very honorable...enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Such a touching write~ Sad when war kills many, even when it's your loved one...  ARCTIC WIND |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - memories never forgotten... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, James. Ida |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Still today she warmly remembers him this precious woman loving a man." Oh! A point so romantically said in so few words. Greatly enjoyed! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James, ... and there is no one better to tell their story than you, my friend. Beautiful in its simplicity. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful James!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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