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viking_metal
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0 posted 10-05-2008 11:28 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for viking_metal

perhaps if I'm lucky
you'll pucker slightly the french doors
that are your mouth
and mine and yours will touch

wrapping me
in an incandescent
sense of happiness
that will last for days

I'll have some of your coffee
So that I'll taste only you
and your citrus sweet
neatness

That I may remember you
when you leave me forever, again.
____________________________________
-The Sadie Series-

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

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1slick_lady
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sad
viking_metal
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2 posted 10-05-2008 11:38 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

A little.

There's always the story of the one that got away.

But that one's almost always the biggest fish in the pond!

Dang, life always has to work that way, huh.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

1slick_lady
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don't worry it gets better

besides i read a quote today that said, "to have a rainbow you have to have the rain"
viking_metal
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4 posted 10-06-2008 12:00 AM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

Too much rain, or too little, yields naught but muddy ground.

No rainbows yet, but that doesn't mean I'm not looking at the sky!

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.
serenity blaze
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5 posted 10-06-2008 07:08 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I am definitely buttin' in here.

(she's as far away as I am...*battin' lashes*)

Great poem.

but bad coffee...

I know coffee. Your next penning should be something about "fresh beans".

mmmm hmmmmm

nudging Helen, 'cause she knows

hint: talk French doors to me baby!

(I live for louvers!) YAY!!!

nice poem
viking_metal
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6 posted 10-06-2008 02:55 PM       View Profile for viking_metal   Email viking_metal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for viking_metal

So is there some sort of sexual connection between you and french roast coffee?

I am confunkled.

And sadie is about 3 hours drive. If you can beat that distance, I'll find a way to make you fall in love with me...

,,,love potion number nine....

-Paul

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Earl Brinkman
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7 posted 05-18-2010 08:56 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

A good piece that is sweet in detail, especially the coffee kisses.
 
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