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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2008-10-05 10:46 AM

It wasn’t the scent of you that brought my eyes to close, my ears to listen
and my nose to scurry in an effort to draw your unwavering,
spell binding sensuality into my quivering arms.

Nor was it the tenderness of your touch, the moist and captivating linger
of your lips or the softness of your voice as my eyes screamed and
ached to have you in my sight.

And, when the moon scrambles across my heart, I know, I deeply know
that this time shall lodge within and never falter or fail to give me
that which is ours for all time....a kiss that pauses and yearns to
again taste the reality of our love..unending and evermore.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-10-05 11:01 AM

Awesome!

turbulent_melody
Junior Member

since 2008-10-01

Posts 22
Australia

2 posted 2008-10-05 11:16 AM

Beautiful poem Magnus.

Please do tell this squire of poetry which form your piece takes?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2008-10-05 11:27 AM

I doubt that you will find a written form of
poetry which completely fills the form of
those that are given. Thnx for asking.

I would guess that free verse is the closest
description. There are others here far more
informed than I.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (10-05-2008 12:13 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2008-10-05 12:53 PM

Magnus,

Romantic, touching, lovely writing... How have you been?

BC

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2008-10-05 01:08 PM

This is so beautiful

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2008-10-05 01:29 PM

Oh, my

be still! (Universe, please don't take me literally! lol)

Barry, you're at your best when you're writing your

's desire! Your words flow like honey from honeycomb...

To love, loving, and being loved in return,
Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2008-10-05 02:03 PM

Thanx Bill...FYI,  all is well here, hope
you are also...

Cat.  Girl, you have been missed from the
walls of blue.  Good to see you haven't given
up...I do understand the dry ink well
syndrome....better than some might know.

Come now Linda, it was nothing more than a
small temblor...DIdn't they used to call
them tremors?   Pleased you enjoyed!!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

8 posted 2008-10-05 08:04 PM

Great post Magnus, she sure sounds like some lady.

Lindsay

pernickitypoppet
New Member

since 2008-10-05

Posts 7
Sth. Australia, Mannum

9 posted 2008-10-05 10:02 PM

I love this. Just as well it isn't any longer, I realised I was holding my breath. Wonderful depth of emotion. Oh, to be so loved. Thankyou.

pernickitypoppet

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-10-05 10:04 PM

One of your finest...James

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