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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-10-03 11:51 AM




like flowing waters down a mountain stream
darkness stills the hush of night
disposing droplets in a late fall rain
cleansing, cooling, refreshing


thoughts renew and hopes regain
feelings of solitude, measures of hope
couplings of conscientiousness again
seedlings of sentient sentiments

bringing life to barren refrains
eternity blossoms in anticipation
looking to the circle to explain
life's meanderings, life's pathways

o, blessed thought-strokes
how softly you ease the pain



© Copyright 2008 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2008-10-03 08:04 PM


Night calls all the demons, past and present, to sate.  I look forward to dawn with renewed hope. I've felt this. Well done.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-10-03 08:55 PM


Your words transcend time and space, and have a deliciously soothing effect on this reader.  Thank you.
OwlSA
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3 posted 2008-10-04 04:01 AM


I am drawing these thought waters around my shoulder like a soft blanket . . . and am being gently lulled to a sweet dream sleep . . .

Thoughts are one of our greatest gifts, but the sad thing is that so few know that.  I am glad that you are one of the few.

- Owl

turbulent_melody
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4 posted 2008-10-04 05:42 AM


Beautiful, just beautiful.  Thankyou.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-10-04 11:52 AM


Your pen strokes are scriptions of poetically pleasing thought-strokes.

I do so enjoy reading your poetry!

Thank you for this pause that refreshed me.

Sending a warm, autumnal hug,
Linda

steavenr
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6 posted 2008-10-04 12:03 PM


TD,
Your comments are as rich as your poetry...thanks for taking the time to read and comment...I appreciate it greatly.


Midnitesun,
Your words were so magnicent that I had to check to see if you were commenting on my work...I humbly thank you.

Owl,
Welcome to the collective of the mind...thank you for reading and commenting

turbulent_melody,
first, welcome to PiP...and btw, thanks for the gracious and kind comments

steavenr
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7 posted 2008-10-04 12:06 PM


Linda, sorry that I missed you.  You must have commented while I was thanking folks.  You were so kind in your comments.  Thank you so much.
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