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Open Poetry #43
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kanashe
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 59
america

0 posted 2008-10-03 09:57 AM


it starts with fire,
burning from the end of your lit cigarette, burning through your lungs,
light yourself another smoke,
make me feel like you care.

it starts with just one drink,
wine with a touch of cyanide,
will you never be free,
look what this is doing to me.

it ends with fire and one more drink,
tasting to your life,
as we watch you sink,
into the earth so deep.

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-10-03 10:31 AM


Terrific!

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-10-03 04:47 PM


kanashe,

A lot said here for sure...

BC

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