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sklagurl17
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since 2008-09-08
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0 posted 2008-10-01 11:56 AM



The sun is bright.
My heart is warm.
The music is blasting.
What a beautiful sight.
I see swirls of color throughout my dorm.
And my mind is spinning out of control.

I am happy and I love where im at.
Then the music gets lounder and my heart beats faster.
This is my world and im truly comfortable.


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2008-10-01 06:10 PM


There are those moments when everything's just all right in our world.

A lovely and uplifting write!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-10-04 03:38 PM


the problem with life being good is that so few know how to recognize it...well done
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