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Open Poetry #43

My Wanting To Reach You

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2008-10-01 07:05 AM

My Wanting To Reach You

The thoughts I have on my mind
I wonder what I should do
Will you be able to comprehend
If I wrote them down for you

Would you sense the frustration
In what I am going through
Could you see this need of mine
In my wanting to reach you

I have counted on your thoughts
If you have any to share
This was the reason for writing
Just to see if you still care

Perhaps just take a few moments
To view thoughts from me
Then let me know if I reach you
It would end my uncertainty

Hope ©2008

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

1 posted 2008-10-01 12:13 PM

sad thoughts often make lovely poetry...such it is with this...thanks for sharing

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2008-10-01 11:57 PM

Yes I do care Hope and I know a lot of other folks on PIP care as well. Cheer up my dear. Love

Lindsay

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