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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2008-09-29 11:24 PM



“Echos”

Silent screams
Of a tormented heart
Sent upon the edge
Of sanity

Screams

Not knowing where to turn
Lost in this endless
misty maze

Lost

All light is gone
Only darkness in sight

Gone

While I pray to be set free

Free

The silent screams
Of a tormented heart
Echo within my soul


[This message has been edited by LoneWolf (10-01-2008 06:13 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-09-30 07:54 AM


Lone Wolf...I like the flow and style of this. Good work. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us...Paul

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Paul

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-09-30 07:57 AM


goodness! this is powerful!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

sklagurl17
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3 posted 2008-09-30 11:37 AM


This is very intense.
I love the setting.

The Lady
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4 posted 2008-09-30 11:29 PM



very profound
and lonely


LoneWolf
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5 posted 2008-10-02 09:59 PM


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