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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-09-28 09:32 AM


Bones knows nothing about you.  

He has no idea what you have.  

You don’t have to be afraid of
Bones breaking in
and stealing your “stuff”.  

He has no idea
what “stuff’s all about.  

If he did,
he might think about it.

Bobby

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-09-28 10:27 AM


Hi Bobby, I like the playing with  stuff which could be anything, even moral or psycho  stuff....Thanks for the good work...

yann

viking_metal
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2 posted 2008-09-28 11:50 AM


Nice one.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-09-28 03:54 PM


Thanks Yann,

For the very kind words on this poem.  I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-09-28 03:55 PM


Thanks Paul,

I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

steavenr
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5 posted 2008-09-28 08:51 PM


can't figure out if Bones is limited or led by fate...does it constrain him without controlling him or does it control him without constraining him--still, loved your work
Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-09-28 09:48 PM


Thanks Steavenr,

I think you would have to say that Bones is completely controlled by fate.

Bobby

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