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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-09-27 11:14 PM


stolen thoughts and pilfered dreams
hidden in the depths of solitude
anchored in right-soared songs
of captivating, care-freed schemes

intermeshing hopes, intertwining
tattered thread-worn tastes
washed ashore on minds' warm beaches
of nectar-laden imaginings

sing, swift peace, o transient heart
leading souls to victories
caressing our scented laughters
into flame-trodden perfect parts

of love, of life, of ever-being one
of two becoming only, and only becoming one



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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2008-09-28 02:20 AM


very beautiful.

yann

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2008-09-28 09:21 AM


intermeshing hopes, intertwining
tattered thread-worn tastes
washed ashore on minds' warm beaches
of nectar-laden imaginings

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I love the sentiment, true to the hearts longing.

Wonderful!!!

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