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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wordlessly the silent teardrops fall the salient earth receives them all festooning festivals of emotions plain on backdrops of heartbeats once again your goodbyes speak volumes of loneliness their sharp replies fill vessels of dull duress my soul melts like citronellas far spent on cold evenings when love was borrowed and misspent farewell, love lost in reverie may teardrops lost on thee replenish ashen earth somewhere and let someone at some time care... again |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm feeling this!!! Your muse is on a roll, and you're writing so fine of late. It's always nice to read you, steavenr~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I think too, you're on a roll, keep on the very fine work... yann |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
it's lovely |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Elegant and poignant! Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Blues, Thanks for the kind comment--glad you enjoyed Yann, appreciate the kind response (merci, he says, using 1 of the 2 French words he knows...the other being oui) T Lady, thanks for taking the time to read and comment Margherita, So glad you liked that part...so did I |
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