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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-09-25 01:26 PM





These Silent Teardrops Fall

This broken hearted melody
Has played on and on
As blue sets the tone
While I am missing someone

Here playing on heartstrings
Tunes lonely and blue
The tears start to flow
I was feeling lost without you

Your guitar playing the blues
I reminisce yesteryears
Sad emotions outpour
Along the tracks of my tears

The songs you played to me
Its your love I still recall
Yet I feel the heartache
As these silent teardrops fall


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WTBAKELAR
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1 posted 2008-09-25 05:26 PM


Its your love I still recall
Yet I feel the heartache
As these silent teardrops fall

You write sad well,  I have been there, done that.  It always gets better.  I use my poetry to bring me and others happiness.

Yours does the same for me.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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2 posted 2008-09-25 09:43 PM



Hope my dear, that is so sad, I really feel for you. With all the friends you have on

PIP you should feel much happier than that.
We are all pulling for you Hope, Love

Lindsay

Margherita
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3 posted 2008-09-26 09:51 AM


No one remains indifferent to the language of your heart, dear Hope! Let not the past overshadow your present life too much though.

You write beautifully.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

steavenr
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4 posted 2008-09-26 08:53 PM


wow...our muses must have been in conference...didn't see this before I posted 'teardrops'...how hauntingly similar they are...nice work
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