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Cloistered Voices
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Cloistered Voices |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Cloistered Voices The stones still whisper each of being quarried roughly and then converted down and down into a season filled with sun and the long, alluring look of grape vines wiling their way through the afternoon. The road led by them, straight and hard, passing fields that further on yielded, smiling, to the sickles sighing from the hands of peasants amply blissful bending over them. RMW |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this is exquisite! I'll tuck this away into my library, to enjoy at my leisure! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RMW~ This is so lovely ....there is a serenity to it that calls out to the reader~ Good to see you grace the pages blue~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is beautiful, reminds me of a painting I remember seeing somewhere. Ida |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Thank you Midnitesun, Marge, and Ida for the kind words. Bob |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
the wonderful days, are indeed, like grapes, waiting to be plucked and eagerly devoured. May you never have raisins! Perfectly written! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderfully expressed, makes one want to sigh along. Love, Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Some very peaceful and beautiful images came to me when reading this. I truly enjoyed. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
It's a watercolor in rhyme |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is beautiful, on many levels. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved the title, the write is raw with real emotions...totally excellent...very nicely done |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so colorful and so very well told. Like a painting, your art is indeed life like. Wonderful work!! |
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